Sleeping Through the Moon Landing by Duncan Chambers
Review by Pauline Kirk
4Word seems to be making a habit of finding excellent poets who have rarely been published.
Duncan Chambers began writing poetry in 1993 “suddenly, and for no apparent reason,” he says in his preface. Born and raised in Burton-on-Trent, he studied at the Universities of York and Sheffield. Though he lives in York he is currently employed as a Research Fellow in Public Health at the University of Sheffield. One previous pamphlet, Questions of Identity, was published by Rotherham Arts Council in 1991. This is only his second booklet, but it is accomplished and distinctive.
Sleeping Through the Moon Landing covers territory I recognise from my own past: moon landings, Dan Dare, Action Man, Ian Botham, Tonto and Wile E. Cayote all appear. Chambers calls on childhood memories for many of his images and settings, but his approach is never nostalgic or self-indulgent. The overall tone is wry and witty, sometimes sharp, occasionally very moving. As he explains:
Some of the poems draw fairly directly on my own life but poetry is not memoir or autobiography. The ‘I’ of the poems is a literary construct, as are the other characters like ‘my mother’ and ‘my uncle’. (Preface)
I gave a mental cheer when I read that statement, for it is an approach I myself adopt. I suspect, like me, he has been accused of writing too personally or being ‘confessional’ as a result. In fact, Duncan Chambers transforms the details and images drawn from his youth into universal themes. He portrays the lingering effect of early experience, often accompanied by a sharp sense of loss and disappointment. The title poem is an excellent example, with its wistful theme of ‘missing out’:
They had no excuse that I was eight
and we had no television; even so
I think my parents should have woken me…
Then we would have gathered round the set
and waited for those words of Armstrong’s, even the youngest
knowing that this night was different from all other nights.
‘Aria’ towards the end of the book returns to the importance of space travel in our time, bringing us up to date. Here a piece of music is to be sent out into space:
Where an alien might sense it without nerves
or ears and with no such thing as a voice
only a low hum. Do you hear it now?
There is humour, as in ‘The Coven’ where the mysterious ways of a mother’s friends are recalled from a boy’s point of view:
In school holidays, the drill was, go out at two
and not come back before five for anything less
than World War III or a double compound fracture.
Childhood images give power to poems about ageing and death too. ‘Gravity’, one of the finest poems in the book, gives a chilling portrayal of death’s approach. It begins:
Death is coming for my uncle
Nike trainers snug
on its dainty little feet…
and pictures him plodding on ‘At 20 minutes to the mile’ like “Wile E. Coyote halfway/across a bridge that isn’t/there …’
‘Tears’ is an equally powerful portrayal of the effect of old age and suppressed grief. It’s impossible to quote a few lines. The poem works as a whole, building verse on verse.
Such skilful mastery of technique is typical. There are few obviously experimental or flashy poems. Form is handled firmly but unobtrusively, varied from poem to poem. Occasionally Duncan Chambers plays tricks on us, as in ‘Les Vacances’ with its schoolboy French, or in ‘Socrates’ where rhyme and interwoven dialogue are used for deliberate effect. ‘Bluesman at Sixty’ conveys the complexities of morality by interweaving a radio broadcast with the poet’s thoughts on the Bluesman’s life. Contemporary comments on Ian Botham’s triumph at Headingley are used in ‘Beefy’ to consider the way issues we ignored in the past can haunt us in later life.
There are also fine poems dealing with the present day or a deeper past, however, such as the elegy ‘The Door’ and ‘Chess Players at Baden Baden,1925’. I suspect a few haven’t yet given up their full meaning to me, like ‘Meg and her Daughters’ and ‘To Pilots of Low Flying Aircraft, but I shall reread them with more leisure. This is a collection it’s well worth returning to time and again.
OUTSIDE, THE BOX by Sue Kindon
Review by Angi Holden
In common with many contemporary poetry pamphlets, Sue Kindon’s Outside, the Box is characterised by a narrative thread that brings a sense of cohesion to a broad range of work. In this particular case it is a literal thread, the sticky fibre spun by Box Moth caterpillars.
Kindon’s sensitive observation evokes an idyllic area of France which has temporarily become an environment that ‘squirms with larvae spinning boxicidal dreams’ (Outside, the Box), where the box hedges lining the footpaths are ‘stripped to the bone’ (Learning to Fly). This may be a localised plague, but Kindon invites us to look beyond the immediate and recognise broader signs of a ‘grown-up, grown-old planet going to earth’. She casts her eye across the threatened world; she is ‘thirsting for the Serengeti’ (Wanderlust) and wishing to throw a ‘whipcord ladder across a melting ice floe’ (The Ultimate Green Thought). These are observational eco-poems, eschewing declamation in favour of an invitation to use our senses.
Whilst the landscape is decimated by a plague of caterpillars, the small village she calls home experiences further loss, with the funerals of six friends in the space of twelve months. The sense of the planet’s fragility is reflected in these gentle poems of grief. There is ‘so much more I wanted to say’ Kindon reflects in her elegy Bernardette. The ‘hearse-hush’ of Marie-Rose’s funeral is disturbed as a ‘cortège of cycles swishes through smelling of sweat’ (Convergence). Mourners ‘smile wearily through the urge to sob’ (Beach Hut Funeral). There is no howling, rather a recognition of the spaces created by these sudden absences.
Kindon expands her observation of boxes. Beyond the infested hedgerows and the village coffins (the local carpenter doubles as undertaker, she tells us), there are the commonplace boom-boxes from which music spills, and the road markings you must not enter until your exit is clear. More significantly, there are the boxes made by her father, a man convinced that nature can be ‘improved on… with spirit level and steel rules’ (Freehand). Her readers might admire the ‘measure of each tooled incision’ and the accuracy of each dovetailed joint, but for the box-maker’s daughter they are symbolic of constraints to be ‘rebelled against’. She revels in inaccuracy, in a house that is ‘open plan: not one of its four walls is straight’.
This rebellion is extended to Kindon’s exploration of form. Alongside conventional couplets and stanzas, there are more experimental poems, which play with white space (Mindscape With Nest), alignment (Convergence and Learning to Swim) and shape (On mistaking the swimming pool for the funicular). The pamphlet also includes prose poems Out of the Ordinary and I am not your Shepherdess, which provide a complete change of pace.
Two short poems celebrate the departure of the moths, in response to a combination of prayer and careful spraying, bringing the narrative arc to its conclusion. This is a thoughtful body of work; Kindon’s box-maker father might indeed ‘pivot in his perfect grave’. But it’s likely he too would admire its skilled craftsmanship and careful construction.
Review by Pauline Kirk
I loved this collection from the moment I saw the cover with its enigmatic comma. Did it mean that the poet thinks ’outside the box’? Sue Kindon certainly does. Or that she is observing a box beyond her – maybe trapped within one?
The opening poem, Box Moth (Cydalima perspectalis) answered my questions. Though only three lines long, it establishes the collection’s most important image: the box moth plague which in 2018 swept through the French Pyrenees where Sue Kindon lives.
White moths haunt each hedge
all summer their larvae gorge
on our ancient ways Box Moth (Cydalima perspectalis)
In the second poem the situation becomes clearer, placing us in a small natural disaster that hints at the larger threats of climate change and species extinction.
Outside, the box
has given up the ghost
of withered leaves…
The poet walks ‘the old ways’ as ‘caterpillars abseil’ in her face, ‘SAS-ing down strong threads.’
By the end of the book harmony is being restored as the seasons turn, but there is a sense of it being a near thing – that Nature as a whole is under threat.
Some are gone forever: others
gather on uncurtained glass,
a last chance limbo… Moths
There are few overtly ‘green’ poems however, and these tend to have a wry note, like The Ultimate Green Thought, which begins ‘And here’s me thinking/I’m throwing a lifeline to the sinking/planet.’ Rather than preaching, Sue Kindon lets her sharply observed natural descriptions speak for her. The idea of walking ‘the old ways’ links many of her poems too, together with a strong sense of place. By the end of the book we have a clear picture of the French Pyrenees with their sweet herbal scents and distant views, of their remoteness and ancient villages, still following a way of life unchanged by modern inventions.
We’re so far off the mains, I cross myself,
or is it my reflection? Our drinking water
isn’t purified, sobbing in glugs
from a faery underworld… The House of Running Water
It’s quite an art, gauging the moment
from the quality of dusk.
Tucking up for the night, the wooden kiss.
No getting out for a last drink of water… The Lore of Shutters
In the Pyrenees, life is closer to Nature – not a cosy city view of the natural world, but one that recognises our place within it, and our vulnerability. Mindscape With Nest conveys this darker side, with a hornet’s nest that starts ‘small as a ping-pong ball’ but because of the poet’s lack of action, leads to ‘the odds /of being stung in our own backyard.’ The poem is not just about one threatening incident, but through the sudden break-down of verse structure and regular rhythm conveys a deeper panic, a fear of what we cannot control. Lines become broken and irregular:
and how no one will help
because we should have nipped it in the larval stage
before it was too late for Pest Control.
Such unexpected playing with form and rhythm adds extra interest to poems such as On mistaking the swimming pool for the funicular, Convergence and Learning to Swim. I was surprised to read that this is only Sue Kindon’s second collection. (Her first pamphlet, She who pays the piper was published by Three Drops Press in 2017.) In Outside, The Box, she writes with a technical skill and confidence normally associated with a more established writer. Her experiments do not feel forced, even when lines suddenly take off down the page. The only experimental poems I’m not entirely convinced by are the two prose poems, but they are interesting even so and tightly controlled.
Kindon plays with the word ‘box’ throughout the collection. A box can be natural growth or a regular construction; it can also be the coffin that awaits us, as in Convergence. In Checkpoint she refers to ‘Our flat-packed journey’ and You must not enter the box until your exit road is clear moves from traffic to mourning ‘all that beauty still to unfold/and you stuck at the lights.’ The Great Unboxed ends with the chilling lines ‘The Great Unboxed /have no dress code’, while Settling In develops effortlessly from getting used to living in ‘this translucent village’ to ‘I could get used to living’. In other poems there is deep sadness at the loss of friends. This is kept from sentimentality by the skilful use of mundane detail, as in Beach Hut Funeral, which begins
We wear our tears
like shiny badges
with sharp pins
We tread water, and smile
for each other; first one home,
put the kettle on. Beach Hut Funeral
Not all the poems are set in the Pyrenees. Some recall a childhood in England, where the poet’s father was appropriately a box-maker (See Freehand). Learning to Fly joins the image of the box moth caterpillars to a memory of jumping off the stairs in an effort to fly, while Excommunicado recalls a child’s simple faith. I appreciate these too, though the French settings and characters made a greater impression on me.
Sue Kindon was born in Croydon and studied English and French Literature at the University of Hull during Philip Larkin’s time. After spending most of her life in bookselling her poetry talent was reawakened in Cumbria by a local writing group; then nurtured by Kendal’s Brewery Poets and the on-line group 52 (set up by Jo Bell.) Her work is a fine answer to the assumption that poetry ‘goes off’ the older you get. It can also have a late and vivid flowering.
I could go on, finding treasures and quoting telling lines, but this review would become too long. I will end by simply saying that I advise you to buy a copy of Outside, The Box.
– Pauline Kirk
Review by David Marx
I could get used to living
in this brittle body.
I will walk it in the mountains
to tire it of self-pity;
lend it my reading glasses,
the better to see through its own
Gone astray. They were there, from Monday to Saturday, locked in the vestry with vases of stagnant hymn books, for telling stories or bad colouring-in. The hands don’t know I’m out on the hillside with Marie Antoinette, gathering bilberries for bible-jam.
(‘I am not your Shepherdess’)
The prime objective with correct and essentially inspired poetry, is to reach out and make an almost immediate impression – if not some sort of indeterminate connection.
Regardless of how tenuous or frivolous.
Or come to that, even subject matter.
Suffice to say, the word ‘correct’ is fundamentally subjective in this instance; as what one may deem as being correct, might well be considered as literally impotent, incorrect and perhaps utter hogwash by another.
There again, The Waste Land wasn’t written in a day.
And if these thirty-three poems are anything to go by, neither was Sue Kindon’s Outside, The Box.
At times delicate and beautiful – not to mention ethereal and eco-mystical – a number of these poems simply penetrate ones’ all to (collectively) considered protective psyche, by way of being both implausible yet impossible to refute.
An altogether non-solipsistic process in other words, that is openly and ultimately ordained by way of (dare one say it) the truth.
The centrifugal rubric of which is touched on by Kindon herself in this pamphlet’s touching Preface: ‘’My subject matter is anything that strikes me – something I can push against that might give; a hunch worthy of being pursued. It’s not a question of sitting down and thinking I’d like to write a poem about that. The that must demand a voice.’’
And if Outside, The Box has anything, it’s most certainly the majestic vortex of a mighty b-i-g voice; of which the two aforementioned poems (‘Settling In’ and (‘I am not your Shepherdess’) the title poem itself, ‘Eve’ and ‘Beach Hut Funeral’ are extremely fine examples:
We wear our tears
like shiny badges
with sharp pins
and smile wearily
through the urge to sob.
Who will be next to give way
We tread water, and smile
For each other; first one home,
Put the kettle on.
To say that many of these poems are anchored within a subliminal slipstream of acute transcendence, might be something of an understatement; but there’s absolutely no denying the detonatory beauty contained herein.
Here’s to the sequel (Inside, The Box?).
LAMPING FOR PICKLED FISH by Beth McDonough
Review by Glen Wilson
Lamping for Pickled Fish finds McDonough in excellent form straight from the very beginning of opening poem Sea Buckthorn,
‘The best way to gather that fruit is to bring secateurs.’
And McDonough wastes little time in getting into the details, bringing the reader right into her endeavours, allowing us to see nature not as some idealised abstract but as something real and more wonderful for it. I especially love the lines;
‘Take them home to freeze, then
strip that ice-hard fruit, without the faff
of detonating juice. Throw away the wood.’
McDonough has a gift for subtle but effective alliteration and assonance, specifically
Passing a great piece of turf which is a superb poem, possessing a rich aural quality and vivid imagery, it squeezes so much into its three stanzas, and this is just one example;
‘Bird, you might be here yet,
hidden by tassel-top nettles,
in whistles of soft velvet grass,
or under clusters of white knuckle rasps’
You force me to tidy the cutlery drawer uses her forensic eye to study how differently we approach even the most mundane of tasks, bringing both insight and light to the things we take for granted.
How to Hand Raise is my particular favourite poem of this collection, a poem to savour for its precise but illuminating narrative, its reads like instructions but asks questions, earning answers as the process reaches its conclusion. The lines, ‘Raise every course. Coax every line/from the centre to the outer.’ are words any poet would aspire to, a stunning piece.
Peloton Mallorca, 2018 also showcases McDonough’s keen observation and storytelling as she brings alongside a ‘sweat of serious cyclists’, capturing them fully for better or worse.
She uses this humour and pathos again to great effect in Enmedio, where the central character ‘bubbles ambition, simmers /toward some island state’ but yet starts as the farting dyspeptic little sister of Teide.
The collection is tied up nicely with the title poem Lamping for Pickled Fish, where we observe the protagonist’s ‘swift finger tickle out their prize’ and this is an apt analogy for what this collection does as a whole.
McDonough catches so many delights for us to marvel at, indeed the whole collection is a set of explorations into one realm or another whether it be Gran Canaria or Kintyre or micro scoping down to the very meaning of a word. McDonough’s adept hand holds each revelation up with a combination of precise skill and child-like wonder, no matter what your taste is, there is something here for everyone to enjoy.
Glen Wilson lives in Portadown with his wife and children. He is a civil servant and Worship Leader at St Mark’s Church of Ireland Portadown. He studied English/Politics at Queens University Belfast and has a Post-Grad Diploma in Journalism studies from the University of Ulster. He has been widely published having work in The Honest Ulsterman, Iota, The Paperclip amongst others. He won the Seamus Heaney Award for New Writing in 2017, the Jonathan Swift Creative Writing Award in 2018 and The Trim Poetry competition in 2019. His first collection of poetry An Experience on the Tongue with Doire Press is out now.
LOTUS MOON WITH BLOSSOM & REMOTE
Review by Mark Connors
Lotus Moon with Blossom poetically charts the life and times of Otagaki Rengetsu, a Buddhist nun, artist and writer in 18th century Japan.
Sheila Hamilton reveals a fascinating portrait of a woman and we are shown glimpses of Rengetsu’s woes and joys as she navigates through her life. Nature and animals provide a symbolic framework on which some of the poems build themselves. In Monkey Bodies, Monkey Minds, we find ourselves among a troupe of monkeys ‘trading punches over something/that right now seems desperately important’. These observations are accompanied by Rengetsu telling us how ‘The mind leaps like these monkeys’ and how their activities mirror the havoc in her head before sleep. ‘There are nights I want to shout out/be still, mind.’
On other nights, Rengetsu finds solace in the animals around her. In Wood Owl an owl becomes a companion:
Marking out dust and dawn
with that steady voice.
Here, Hamilton procures a calming contrast for Rengetsu, where order and security are found as opposed to those nights when her head is full of monkeys. Moon Pictures explores Rengetsu’s childhood and readers may draw conclusions that her childhood was often troubled:
a child in Honchu
when I saw the beach crawling:
In Rengetsu, The Nearest We Get To A Portrait Of You, Hamilton illustrates, despite her research into her subject, that Rengetsu is still an enigma to the poet and a defining image of her remains elusive:
Maybe you said “No”
for spiritual reasons,
or because you disliked
the sight of the tripod,
tall black thing wanting to catch you.
So, Hamilton has to rely on her own research:
So I look elsewhere,
at the things that leap into, sprout out of
your poems, your prints…
The most devastating poem in the pamphlet is The Survivor Trees, so robust and tenacious that they survived the atomic bomb dropped on Hiroshima. Again, Hamilton creates exquisite connections between nature and her subject:
Your death happened
and the bamboo kept on living slowly…
and seventy years later,
those were trees that survived
even the dropping of the bomb on Hiroshima,
their roots able to heal and to thrive…
In a footnote at the end of the poem we are told that trees only suffered damage above ground and their roots remained intact. By illustrating the connection between Rengetsu and these trees (‘Whatever you were Rengetsu, there were trees’) Hamilton immortalizes both the trees and Rengetsu as the survivors they undoubtedly are.
After reading these beautifully crafted poems, the reader is left with a beguiling portrait of a life well lived, a life full of beauty and wonder, a survivor who will live on in the hearts and minds of those who encounter these poems.
Remote by Sarwa Azeez begins with the following quote from Anne Frank: ‘I can shake off everything when I write. My sorrows disappear; my courage is reborn.’
One hopes that Azeez feels the same way. It is evident that, throughout this startling and moving pamphlet, Azeez is both witness and reporter of the patriarchal world her subjects inhabit and haunt.
The pamphlet begins with a leaving, where we are drawn into a war-torn winter in Iraqi Kurdistan ‘where children play/making desks from bricks and stone’, where ‘Friends’ fingers dipped in fire soot (draw) birds on cardboard walls.’
Leave is a telling opening poem where resilient kids live their childhoods as they should, despite the oppression and devastation of war. The poem ends with the narrator being asked to leave by the birds drawn on the wall. And it doesn’t take long to realise why the birds asked the ‘me’ of the poem to leave.
In Today Another Yazidi Virgin is on Sale we are taken to an auction market where a buyer chooses Virgin Beautiful. This poem chronicles slavery and subjugation in powerful images where Mothers and Daughters live in ‘the worn house’ where ‘everything’s entrenched in dust’ Azeez deftly connects these women slaves with all ‘jawary’ (the plural of the Arabic word jarya, meaning female slave) that have suffered throughout history:
The rusts of her slavery
Penetrate deep down
To the ancient vaults of jawary bazaars
In Renunion, which is ‘fun’ for the ‘I’ of the poem, the ‘I’ meets the children of her classmates and the reader soon knows the Mothers in question are young. Azeez describes the children as ’round’ and ‘little’ with sweet smiles but when the final stanza delivers its devastating final image, we are left in no doubt that this recurring cycle of oppression in a patriarchal world seems impossible to escape from until death.
I keep staring at their faces
which look exactly like their moms’,
fearing that one day my daughter
may inherit my exact mummified mouth.
Azeez’s startling, often haunting poems give voice to those with no voice. The oppressed girls and women of war-torn Iraqi-Kurdistan are forced to exist under patriarchal power structures that can be as oppressive and devastating as the war which seems to perpetually rage around them.
These two pamphlets are excellent examples of the thought-provoking titles that 4Word Press continue to publish. It marks them out as a small press determined to shine a spotlight on poets writing about a wide range of cultural and international issues, in varied and powerful ways.
With further titles out now and on the horizon, 4Word Press is a distinctive poetry publisher that are one to watch in the poetry world. I’d be surprised if its sterling work doesn’t lead to nominations for its innovative approach to publishing when the awards season comes around.
LOTUS MOON WITH BLOSSOM by Sheila Hamilton
Review by Angi Holden
During her research into the life of Rengetsu, poet Sheila Hamilton trawls the internet for a visual image of the Buddhist nun, writer and artist. Without success. Although photography had been invented during Rengetsu’s lifetime, Hamilton observes:
I find sepia photographs
of washerwomen, courtesans, tea-girls
but not Rengetsu The Revered Poet.
Rengetsu, The Nearest We Get To A Portrait of You
The instant availability of images characterises the age in which we live. The image dominates our world, from business and advertising to entertainment and publishing. Even in historical articles or exhibitions we expect to find portraits, especially of someone so revered in their own culture.
Hamilton speculates that the nun’s resistance to being photographed might be a contributory factor. She then turns to natural and artistic images as a means to explore her subject:
So I look elsewhere
at the things that leap into, sprout out of,
your poems, your prints:
the fox, lean vibrant;
the cherry-blossom they scatter you near.
Rengetsu, The Nearest We Get To A Portrait of You
This alternative evocation is at the heart of Lotus Moon with Blossom, Hamilton’s fascinating pamphlet published by 4Word Press. It proves a challenge, for Rengetsu is a shape-shifter:
Last week, she acquired the form
of a peach merchant; the week before,
a civil servant, bowing,
and, tonight, a nun.
Print of a Shapeshifter
Rengetsu has an interesting background. The daughter of a courtesan and a nobleman, she was brought up in a privileged environment. Twice married and widowed, and having out-lived her five children, she became an itinerant nun by her mid-thirties.
After the losses,
I drag myself,
and sometimes stumble,
to new places, new things….
After Official Mourning.
Hamilton describes how, inspired by her sense of place, Rengetsu supported herself making and selling artwork:
This place is mainly calligraphy:
silk, wood, mulberry paper,
the inks that suit each
while this place gives rise to many poems,
and other forms not described in the manuals.
Forbidden to Live in the Monastery
As she travels, Rengetsu grieves for each of her lost children, recalling for example:
My little son, cramping.
I stayed with him all night,
sponging his forehead.
Watched, later, as they wrapped
his small cold body up.
Jizo, By The Wayside
Despite the privations of living outside of the Buddhist monasteries (women not being permitted to take up permanent residence) Rengetsu lived a long life. She died in 1875 aged 84. Hamilton describes the Hibakujumoku, the survivor trees of Hiroshima:
… how tough tree-bark is,
and tree-roots, tougher,
and how trees survive almost anything…
their roots able to heal and to thrive…
The Survivor Trees
With its rich list of botanical names – oleander and eucalypt, hemp plant and sago palm, camellia and quince – the poem tells us that some of the older trees may have been growing during the nun’s lifetime. However, the images also act as a metaphor for Rengetsu’s ability to survive the uncertainties and tragedies of her own life.
Throughout Lotus Moon with Blossom, Hamilton draws on the natural environment to conjure the persona of the nun: snow-melt and pebble streams, finches and warblers, moss-gardens and koi-ponds, monkeys, foxes and wood owls. To counterbalance the beauty of rural Japan there are also glimpses the reality of her hard, solitary existence, so that we develop an impression of her robust character.
Through the eyes of a visiting student for example, Hamilton suggests not everyone has found her helpful… her advice too vague… a bad-tempered person… She evokes a strong-willed, imperfect character, and describes Rengetsu’s artistic processes, as she
… shapes a bowl that is not quite even,
carves her own words
into still-wet clay…
But in laying her own words on paper, Hamilton’s abiding images recognise Rengetsu’s inner serenity and she imagines her as
who, even on his/her worst days,
is still wiser and kinder
than everybody else.
A Student Seeks Out Rengetsu For Possible Mentoring.
Whilst there is a caveat that, like the student searching for Rengetsu, we might find She is not there, Hamilton has created a word picture that honours the essence of this enigmatic artist and the culture in which she lived.
REMOTE by Sarwa Azeez
Review by Angi Holden
“They tell you it’s not easy
to find a lost thing
among ruins and debris.”
These lines open Sarwa Azeez’s poem Keep Searching, which is placed at the centre of her newly published pamphlet Remote. In all senses the poem seems pivotal to this collection, a moment to pause and take stock, to digest what has come before, to prepare for what is to come. For Remoteis not an easy read. The language may be straightforward and the tone at times conversational, but the subject matter is dark and challenging.
Sarwa Azeez was born just after her parents were displaced by the Iraq-Iran war, and grew up with this conflict as the backdrop to her childhood. Few people can be unaware of the brutality of the Iraq-Iran conflicts, of Saddam Hussein and the later Gulf War. Yet in many ways the events have become, to borrow Azeez’s title, ‘remote’. It’s easy to perceive them as ‘past’, given the more recent events that dominate our headlines. In this pamphlet she reminds us that the events she lived through are not ‘over’ either personally or collectively, and that their international ramifications continue. Azeez speaks both as a witness to conflict, as in What Did She Witness?:
The therapist asks her,
What did you witness?
Her mouth freezes,
eyes want to take over
and as a forecaster, as in Reunionwhere she talks of
fearing that one day my daughter
may inherit my exact mummified mouth.
The experiences she describes are shocking: the children at play among the rubble, ‘making desks from bricks and stone’ (Leave), the wives and mothers traumatised by ‘the moments when / they came and took him away.’ (Waiting),and the fugitive girl forced to ‘bury fear / this loneliness’ as she runs ‘barefoot / stepping on half-buried / animal skulls. ‘(Ode to the Yazidi Captive Bride). These powerful images linger in the subconscious, long after the pamphlet has been closed.
The experiences of men are depicted in some of the poems, for example in Vineyard, where Azeez describes how her father on his journey to work ‘would see bodies in uniforms, / piles of them’and in Time, where her Uncle Suleman recalls ‘his captive youth / waiting to be discharged / waiting to be home again’. However,the most compelling experiences remain those of the women. They are the witnesses to atrocities, like Maryam forever haunted by the image of her husband, buried alive or the unnamed Yazidi Virgin, sold to the highest bidder. They are women fighting for survival in a patriarchal society, who daily live with the constraints of ‘something toxic’ muting their voices (Something Toxic Was Muting Me).
Azeez brings a fresh eye to the body of poetry providing first-hand commentary on the effects of war. Her language, both in lexicon and construction, is youthful, almost naive, and her lightness of touch leaves the reader with space to interpret the culture of fear and repression. In a time when one appalling headline is rapidly followed by another, Azeez reminds us that for each generation of displaced people ‘old news’ is always current.
INCIDENTALS by Mary Gilonne
Review by Beth McDonough
If light fails, follow darkness
in my eyes she says, unfolds the map
engraved on her, marks him with a cross
and draws him in.
(“The Woodman’s Tale”)
Just as the recently-deceased Nicolas Roeg’s film Insignificance plays lightly with several kinds of significance, only the foolhardy would draw easy assumptions from Incidentals’ title. The name of Mary Gilonne’s debut pamphlet may imply asides, but far from being casual, these poems arrest and examine moments, in both their strengths and frailty, before they are allowed to become fleeting. Incidentals offers small spaces of unexpected revelation, self-awareness and determination. As observed fragments, they are all highly significant and resonant.
Perhaps it’s worth considering the fitting nature of this publication’s form here. Currently, there is a real renaissance in poetry pamphlets, their scale appealing to many, for many reasons. Ally this with some very vibrant independent poetry presses which are producing exciting, well-designed and highly-affordable books. Pamphlet specialists are brandishing sometimes laudably subversive challenges to the established presses. How marvellous! 4Word Press is a recent arrival, and it is already earning its place as an adventurous publisher. As with their other publications, Claire Jefferson’s distinctively elegant cover sets the bar high from the outset. Mary Gilonne’s lines fulfil that promise.
English-born Gilonne has long been resident near Aix-en-Provence, where she works as a translator. The languages enjoyed here are drawn from three continents and there’s even an acrobatic foray into an English/ Esperanto macaronic. Her linguist’s delight in the layering and provenance of words is embedded in every poem; throughout, there is a feeling of travelling and of place. The poet’s cartography is a sensuous one, drawn on flesh, and indeed tattooed through all of the senses. These are opulent poems, often gracefully, yet tautly erotic. Narratives are communicated in painterly visuals, and sound-rich imagery. However, this poet’s careful crafting, and her formal restraint, ensures that these heady elements are wisely harnessed. Gilonne has a cleverly undercutting way, particularly with sharp stanza ‒ and poem ‒ ending lines, sometimes in the form of a refrain, and she slits into her riches intriguingly. This poet writes beautifully of textiles, but she is equally adept at conveying muscle. Reader, be wary!
When from bed to wall lies a litter of windowed
moons to use as stepping-stones, and light slices
through our kitchen thrum, as if your voice and mine
cut blunt with metallic glints of old nicked knives,
I’ll leave you.
In “Cardinale Frucci Covets Snow”, the poem’s initial impetus was ekphrastic, as it first appeared online in Visual Verse. However, it’s very satisfying to read it here. The poem works convincingly without that pictorial connection, allowing the reader a certain wander and wonder, before perhaps choosing to seek out the accompanying image. Then, there is the gift of almost another poem. The equally visual “Quietus” evokes detail and sadness, rather as Millais’ Ophelia does, and makes the reader pause to consider kintsugi’s broken and mended quality. The pausing seems essential to the whole collection.
If Incidentals contains the sombre, including grave ill health, death, difficult and sometimes painfully pragmatic choices, there’s also the bitter-sweet of “Findings”, the “paged archaeology” of “a Twiggied girl in party Quant and curls”, and the glorious energy, both in word and typographic arrangement of “Sunday With Lili”.
Gilonne has a colourful, highly textured way with metaphor, ideally suited to exploring the sensory losses of “Ageusia”. Equally, “Equilibrium” allows her the balancing act of moving in and out of metaphor,
toeing a fine line between sense and none,
while high-wired idioms suspend my views.
She is no less adept with simile, for who could not be drawn to “skin indolent as wine”? Her closing poem offers procrastination of the most appealing kind.
Mary Gilonne’s publication and competition successes are impressive, and this gathering of her work is timely. Incidentals may be physically small, but its much larger allusions and connections make it perfectly formed.
GIRL GOLEM by Rachael Clyne
Review by Fiona Sinclair
Family lies at the heart of this collection. Its narrative arc moves from a Jewish childhood through to the tender recounting of clearing elderly relatives’ homes after their death. Its focus on family members who fled oppressive regimens of the mid 20thCentury is specific but also resonates with the plight of more recent refugees.
The first poem in the collection small histories remind us how houses and indeed lives become littered with the detritus of the past . This is a cleverly structured poem, cleft into two adjacent stanzas that serves as a visual reminder of the fragmented nature of memory. Indeed, Clyne has a gift for using structured to effectively reinforce meaning. A later poem, Art of Erasure replicates with enviable skill the shattered thought processes of a brain beset by dementia.
Jewishness enriches the portrait of a family with the use of dialect, customs, history and indeed cultural expectations on children. The cast of characters includes an eccentric grandma who with skill ‘re-pins ‘the child’s dressing gown . There is precise and effective use of detail here as the elderly lady’s mouth holding the pins is described as having ‘ gummy lips’ . She ‘ cackles at her own jokes’ and ‘ indulgently feeds the child egg-fried bread ‘ mum and dad clearly do not approve of . Revealing here that grandmother-granddaughter alliance that often leaps a generation. Yet this is no soft and fluffy grandmother as she is also given to ‘rage. Like the time she flung a pan of peas, cursed in Russian.’ Tailoring is the family trade , carried with them to the new country. The narrator’s father is revealed as master craftsman who in a touching poem makes , The Only suit he made me that allowed her to ‘strut my stuff on Lord Street’ during the swinging ‘60s.
The verse set in a post war childhood is rich with details that will create recognition in the reader familiar to this era. The poem That Was Downstairs evokes the austerity of a post war house lacking modern conveniences and comforts. The tone is blackly humorous with terms such as ‘Bathroom was a bastard ’ and recalls the dreaded harsh toilet paper that’ slid off bottoms.’ In a sense this poem subtly infers a family occasionally at war with itself, not quite settled in its new country, still haunted by the violence that drove it from mainland Europe. In other poems there are echoes of violence, the grandma alters the child’s dressing gown with ‘a razor blade in her trembling claw’.
Poems focussing on the older family members who lived through the flight from Russia are beset by memories of the horrors of war and indeed of the lost homeland. Jewish words pepper these works. They are verbal cues that create flashbacks to the horrors of the holocaust and pogroms. There are touching references to family members who did not escape such as the great aunt who worked for Coco Chanel. The illusion to the family trade of tailoring and this specific detailing serves to make the horrors seem more personal. Inevitably the referencing to Jewish refugees resonates with the horrors of more recent and on-going atrocities and the flight of civilians who are collateral damage. Nothing it shows has changed. The poem Toadsong is particularly effective poem in that it conveys a double meaning. Whilst on the surface it deals with toads who invade the house and are tolerated but on another level it obliquely references, refugees as the four characters ‘shared childhood tales of being Jews’. Their sense of unbelonging strikingly evoked in the words ‘The ugly undertones, sense of foreignness’.
Yet the works are also keen to reveal how inter- connected we all are. Not just in our shared sense of family but also in shared repercussions to worldwide catastrophe. This is best seen in Chernobyl Museum where the shocking man-made disaster in Russian, has repercussions years later when it ‘spawned a cancer, in a friend’ in Wales, ‘that took decades to flower’.
At the heart of the collection lies the eponymous Girl Golem whom we take to be the narrator herself. The poem starkly reveal how the child almost resisted birth ‘clung bat-like to the womb wall’ somehow knowing that she was destined to carry the hopes and dreams of that family’s future. More than this her role was to ‘compensate for millions’, ‘make up for the lost numbers’. Born into such expectations it is inferred that this child would never fit into such a mould.
Growing up she self-defines as a ‘a hotchpotch golem /that would never fit’. It is inferred further that being gay she would never be accepted by the family or indeed be able to fulfil the family expectations of providing grandchildren so consequently left ‘in search of my own kind.’
The latter sections of the poems hints at reconciliation albeit when the relatives are elderly and, in some cases, losing their memory. These are starkly honest poems with experiences that resonate with us all. A father figure is paid respects to after his death. Again, fine details are tenderly deployed as his personal effects are handed to the daughter. Hints to his personality subtly betrayed in the ‘fake Rolex’, ‘credit cards’ ‘clothes in a black bin bag’. The realities of clearing a family home after death are then looked at. Again, the lost personality is revealed in things. The father stock piled clothes deemed bargains, hoarded everything from clothes to ‘pinched’ Asda plastic spoons. This very need to hoard harping back to a time when as a refugee, personal effects were few. False teeth are a motif throughout the collection bringing with them the images of the piles of dentures found stacked in concentration camps. They are a bizarre but also macabre image. Again, in this poem Taking Account they are darkly humorous as fourteen sets of dentures tumble on the narrator’s head from head from atop a wardrobe. The up- shot to such hoarding is a staggering 80 bins of items left out for rubbish collection.
This is a very fine collection that deals with families and our place within them. It demonstrates too how on the wider political stage, nothing changes, conflict still sees civilians as collateral, who become dispossessed, and must struggle to find new homes. The poet is particularly adept at using structure to reinforce meaning and using very fine imagery throughout to make this a vivid piece of work.
– Fiona Sinclair
Review of Girl Golem by Rachael Clyne, 4word Press. 2018 For Tears in the Fence Reviewed By Jessica Mookherjee (author of Flood, Cultured Llama 2017, and forthcoming Burst, Nine Arches Press 2019)
We know Rachael Clyne from these poems and from her previous collection “Singing at the Bone Tree” (Indigo Dreams 2014). We know from her biography that she was an actor, artist and psychotherapist and so well versed in the art of re-creation and performance. But we know Rachael Clyne from her poems. This collection, Girl Golem is aching in both hiding and being seen and in escaping. The Golem is creature from Jewish folklore, made of mud and the perfect servant, a Frankenstein like monster, animated to do the master’s bidding, often animated by a magic of some sort.
“I was made as a keep-watch,
in case new nasties tried to take us away.
The family called me chutchkele, their little cnadle,
Said I helped make up for lost numbers –“
Clyne’s collection of magic words brings her Girl Golem to life, a creature that is more then the sum of her words, and a creature that is bold, untamable and no one’s slave or victim. The secret pronunciation of the Slavic and Yiddish words, the way the ‘la’ is said at the end of the word cnadle, the secret endearments of ‘knicknack’ and ‘dumpling’, these are magic words, of heartbreak and hearth. These are words that could easily have disappeared in genocide, these are words of survival and power. This is the mix of mud-words that give Girl Golem power, because Clyne is escaping the loaded survival of the Jew as much as she is escaping the fixed identities of ‘survivor’ and ‘victim’ and ‘Jewish’. She is creating herself in these words throught the collection, she creates and dismantles.
“wore off the peg. I ironed my hair straight
under brown paper, like Cathy McGowen’s”
This is a coherent collection of 29 poems, bound beautifully by 4word Press. Clyne is accurate and assured which immediately gives her readers confidence from her first poem ‘Small Histories’ which opens in a ‘mirror’ form of two reflecting poems that can be read as one poem or two separate fragments – each speaking to each other and the last two lines of the poem/s sparking the life of the collection with
‘Sorry for your losses repeated arguments
All the love yous gather dust.”
The collection begins with the creation of the Girl Golem and continues a domestic and biographical narrative from a fairy tale, child-like point of view, where we hear of the ‘nose-picker’, the ‘grandma with big teeth’ and an
who made chicken soup with garlic”
Like all good East European folk tales things are just a little bit ‘foreign’ and out of place, where objects are people and the people behave inexplicably and unpredictably, particularly in Britain where we don’t eat olives for breakfast. She personifies her family into spaces.
“the bathroom was a bastard”
Clyne makes great currency of foreignness in the poem “X-Rated” where we see her version of the ‘great escape’ is not ‘plucky chaps’ with gung ho zeal but the smell of shit and sewers, Andrzei Wajda’s shit. This shit belongs to someone with a name and Clyne calls it out. This is immigrant poetry calling to ancestors, this is also a masterful use of contemporary poetry techniques to re-animate the ‘foreign’ inside everyone. Clyne will not be defined by being a Jewish poet writing about the Holocaust. Why should she? She contains more then that, but she can also not fully escape that, and neither can we, for Clyne reminds us that we all live in this world where we must know that the horrors have happened over and over again to countless, nameless people.
“Holocaust is not my middle name.
As if gypsies, Lakota and bison, gorillas
and black lives don’t count, or a Palestinian
and tiger have no claim. As if Tartars did not burn”
This collection that starts biographically in childhood speaks of maturity and a life spent unpicking the roots of identity and escaping from it’s boundaries. These are not poems of youth. Clyne tells us she has come of age in a world of plurality, in a place where we are free to construct our own identities and yet we can not escape our histories.
“Final in the forties, when it is pregnant
with me, they were naturalized.
So I was originated, British as mustard
and new health services”
The collection collapses time, we are taken to Odessa, to Warsaw sewers, to the Kings Road, to the English Suburbs, to Lancashire. One of the most moving poems uses the technique of ‘erasure’, made more poignant when we know that letters were redacted in the war, that people were erased. Clyne uses wonderful last lines to great effect in her poem “The Art of Erasure”
“That one wipes the war between them
leaves the daughter lost for “
This collection left me yearning for more yet the “Girl Golem” is a perfect length. The use of objects through the book is subtle, and then violently visceral when we read of the father’s ‘Magic Suit’, how in death we are all that is left of us, “hearing aids, glasses” and the awful pull of the words when we know the horrors of genocide left these objects behind. Clyne is defiant, there are big horrors that take us politically by the neck and yet we will all loose a parent and have to put their debris in a bin bag.
“his clothes in a black bin bag.
As she handed me his credit cards
I knew there’d be debts to clear.”
Clyne has achieved her creation and let it escape the pages of the book and into our bodies using tight, clipped words, a semblance of the east European hard consonants creep into everyday language, strong visual line endings interlaced with a sense of ‘wrongness’ and ‘foreignness’
“Cheek-by-jowl neighbours chop vegetables
into enamel bowls. Between drug dealers
and satellite dishes, ghosts gather. Water sellers
tailors and a shiver that runs up my back”
Clyne ends the collection beautifully and escapes with the poems “In the Margins” and “Apocalypse Shoes” and she helps us, as a poet only can, survive the onslaughts of our own escapes into freedom, survival and ourselves. I look forward to more from this accomplished poet.
BLACK BICYCLE by Lesley Quayle
Review by Rox Cawley
Black Bicycle – a superb book of poems from the hugely talented Lesley Quayle (though I do wish she would stop making me cry with some of her word-pictures!). Cannot recommend this ‘pamphlet’ (it’s not – it’s a book) highly enough. Many thanks for such pleasure.
Review by Sheila Hamilton
Lesley Quayle’s poetry has a wonderful sense of the local without ever falling into the parochial. “Old Yowe In the Market” (“Old, barren yowe, teats dry as corn husks. . .”) is one lovely example, employing as it does the local Yorkshire word rather than the more standard “ewe.” And it definitely isn’t guilty of sentimentality:
Shepherds in greasy caps and shit-stained trousers,
belted, braced by baler twine, walk on,
rubbing their raw-boned hands.
The Yorkshire explored in several of these poems (Quayle lived in rural West Yorkshire for two decades) is not picturesque and the life, not easy (“We gather, a disparate flock, summoned to the desolation/of a winter quarry” is how “Fell Rescue” opens, while “The 7.25 to Leeds” enters bleak urban territory) yet what lifts these poems, alongside others in the collection rooted in other places, is a warm humanity and close attention to detail.
Several of the people who dance, drink, smoke, sing and dream in this collection are street people, rough-sleepers and hopeful buskers. They have names like Scarlet Mary, Holy Tola, Old Moley (“three coats, two waistcoats, jumpers, vests-/layered back to a museum of skin”), the names given them by passers-by, their “regulars.” And while one can feel sympathy for their difficult circumstances, there’s nothing in these poems that reeks of condescension or pity.
Quayle is equally at home with landscape, with Dorset as much as Yorkshire:
Smell the sea-
lungs brackish, brine rinsed
gulls bickering over a thin westerly.
(“Climb to Mupe Bay”)
Towards the end of the pamphlet she moves further still, into wider territory and into different voices, one of a man in Raqqa recalling the violent death of a friend, another in the voice of Edward Snowden. As in the street poems, there is a respect and warmth here for the individual and an honouring of the individual’s experience.
-Sheila Hamilton, poet ( ‘The Spirit Vaults’ published by Green Bottle Press)
Review by Deborah Alma
I love these poems by Lesley Quayle! …such subtle music…they need to be read aloud to fully appreciate the rhythm and craft …often melancholy…lost people and places and times… wise and beautiful writing!
Journeying with Lesley is invigorating, fascinating, unexpected. The light she shines reveals the essence of whatever or wherever it falls. Her portraits of the ordinary, the outcast, the old, the quirky, glow in the beam of her humanity. She describes a landscape I know intimately myself. Her personal experience of it is expressed fearlessly. She paints the colours and sounds of life with knowledge and passion.
-Dame Josephine Barstow DBE
ANDROGYNY by Kevin Reid
Review by Beth McDonough
Kevin Reid’s Androgyny is bittersweet, funny, hurt-filled, observed and heard. Pithy, quickly caught, and held for a lifetime. It’s huge strength is it’s never just one thing.
– Beth McDonough
Review by John Field
Kevin Reid’s latest pamphlet, Androgyny, explores the rich spectrum of sexuality and treats the reader as a confidant, as a friend, while biting its thumb at confession and notions of sin. It’s an affecting, disarming work that encompasses culture, family and desire with authenticity, maturity and sensitivity.
AFTER EDEN by Stella Wulf
Review by Graham Mort
Stella Wulf’s poetry occupies a space of dissolution between reality and myth, historical awareness and immediacy. Her language is layered with the ruggedness and density of impasto, but there is also transparency and precision. The muscularity of verbs, the rich specificity of nouns and an underlying musicality keep the poems fluid through subtle formal placements. They are rhythmical and carefully wrought, moving from Wales to France, from personal engagement to archetypal human and non-human characters, allowing time and historical depths to be disclosed through compact and evocative images. The poems artfully interrogate the lives of women, the choreography of the sexual dance, with cool irony and grace. They don’t flinch from dissonance, allowing a sense of moral complication and verbal multivalence to prevail. This is a sensuous, alert, and impressive first collection.
– Graham Mort
Review by David Fisher